Monday, October 10, 2011

Oh Time! If you could sublime...

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Coveting the time to go slow,
Wishing to hold the moments and dont let them go.
Time is now reminding about my return,
To get ready and go about turn.
Can you not spare me this time?
Let me enjoy more,
I am making castles of sand,
And with playing music band,
I am roaming ashore.
Have some wait,
A nap of relaxing bait.
You move on and on,
You never stop
To regret what’s gone.
Why are you so “unhearty”?
Why you never pity Oh dirty?
Is that so because you can’t die?
Oh Come on! It’s just a lie.
Whom will you live with
If we are not here
To pay you rich.
Leave your taste of lime,
Go hearty, and sublime.
Let us live some more,
Making castles of sand,
And with playing music band,
Let us roam some more ashore.
Are you jealous of our laugh?
Stop your poking,
Trying to make them dwarf.
Be with us,
With our joy luminous,
Don’t cut them away,
With your ticking array.
Let us live some more,
Making castles of sand,
And with playing music band,
Let us roam some more ashore.



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Copyrights  - ANSHUL GAUTAM
 

26 comments:

  1. snehaOctober 10, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    let us roam some more ashore...
    Oh i loved it anshul.

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  2. anirban sahaOctober 10, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    i dont know how to react... and this shall be mmy comment :-/

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  3. Manisha BhatiaOctober 10, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    I loved this one! Its something PERFECT wt i look for usually!

    Well done! I m putting ths on my desk!

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  4. sancheeta biswasOctober 10, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    the two lines.....

    making castles of sand
    and playing with music bands

    took my heart away.

    this time it was a poetry that catches the senses at a very high pitch. well done.

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  5. sulekkhaOctober 10, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    Time and tide wait for no man but for a woman they make an exception :) Lovely poem..

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  6. JANUOctober 10, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    Beautiful...:-)Am following you now.

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  7. Ashish kumarOctober 10, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    I m feeling glad.
    My tension is free and i m relaxed.
    Some says time is precious.
    Effective use of time will make ur life delicious...

    Nice poem as i expected. Felt good. Keep going.

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  8. Anshul GautamOctober 10, 2011 at 5:10 PM

    @ Sneha and Anirban Da - :)

    @Mani - Its my pleasure that you liked my work. :)

    @ Janu di & Sulekha di - Time and tide wait for none. Very true. This made me go engrossed with ideas about this poem. :)

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  9. Anshul GautamOctober 10, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    @Ashish- Thank you buddy. :)Keep visitng, Keep motivating ...

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  10. Saru SinghalOctober 10, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    Anshul, this is so profound and beautifully crafted...
    Saru

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  11. PORTIAOctober 10, 2011 at 8:11 PM

    'O Time! Thou tutor both to good and bad!...'
    (Shakespeare)
    Let us learn only some good from Time!
    -PORTIA

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  12. Roy DurhamOctober 10, 2011 at 8:16 PM

    fantastic , great one love this poem may i copy it to print and put it on my wall god bless

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  13. Vinay Leo R.October 10, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    Time never goes as we want it to I think.. I'd love it if it stood still during times I treasure and sped like warp speed during office meetings :D Sigh.. if only.. ;) Nicely worded, Anshul..!

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

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  14. Alpana JaiswalOctober 10, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    Loved it Anshul....In life, many thoughts are born in the course of a moment, an hour, a day. Some are dreams, some visions. Often, we are unable to distinguish between them. To some, they are the same; however, not all dreams are visions. Much energy is lost in fanciful dreams that never bear fruit. But visions are messages from the Great Spirit, each for a different purpose in life. Consequently, one person's vision may not be that of another. To have a vision, one must be prepared to receive it, and when it comes, to accept it. Thus when these inner urges become reality, only then can visions be fulfilled. The spiritual side of life knows everyone's heart and who to trust. How could a vision ever be given to someone to harbor if that person could not be trusted to carry it out. The message is simple: commitment precedes vision.

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  15. Anshul GautamOctober 11, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    @Saru- Thank you so much... :)
    @Portia - Yup. Very true...Time is the best tutor...though we learn after failing.

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  16. Anshul GautamOctober 11, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    @ leo - You are very true leo...time never goes as we want it to I think...

    @Roy Durham - It would me my honour sir..:) thank you very much...

    @Alpana - "commitment precedes vision" I got it very well alpana di...best words of motivation, explanation. Feeling very happy that you visited and commented for my work :)

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  17. vikramOctober 11, 2011 at 11:14 AM

    i never knew you are this expressive. Keep going!

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  18. Rajorshi GhoshOctober 11, 2011 at 5:00 PM

    Stunned. Dunno what to say. But I'll say this. You've got some awesome skills man! Hold on to them forever :)

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  19. Anshul GautamOctober 11, 2011 at 5:14 PM

    oh thank you so much rajorshi...it always feel good when frnds motivate you in your work...keep visiting and keep motivating :)

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  20. rakhiOctober 11, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    luvd it!

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  21. Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comOctober 11, 2011 at 8:55 PM

    This is beautiful Anshul. Lovely writing style. I look forward to seeing your future posts in your new group :)

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  22. AnonymousOctober 11, 2011 at 10:39 PM

    Anshul, I really like your style of writing and thanks for Jagjit ji's tribute....

    I am listening to someone, somewhere now...

    #_#
    The Blunt Blog

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  23. Anshul GautamOctober 12, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    @TheBluntBlogger - thank you so much...keep visiting to look for more on my site. :)

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  24. UnknownOctober 12, 2011 at 8:52 AM

    Great,loved it

    http://itstigertime.blogspot.com/2011/10/you-tube-tuesday_10.html

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  25. Jessica Brant BlogNosticsOctober 12, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    Anshul,

    Beautifully written and versed...

    xoxo

    Jessica

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  26. s k mishraOctober 16, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    just brilliant.

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