Monday, October 10, 2011

Oh Time! If you could sublime...



Coveting the time to go slow,
Wishing to hold the moments and dont let them go.
Time is now reminding about my return,
To get ready and go about turn.
Can you not spare me this time?
Let me enjoy more,
I am making castles of sand,
And with playing music band,
I am roaming ashore.
Have some wait,
A nap of relaxing bait.
You move on and on,
You never stop
To regret what’s gone.
Why are you so “unhearty”?
Why you never pity Oh dirty?
Is that so because you can’t die?

Oh Come on! It’s just a lie.
Whom will you live with
If we are not here
To pay you rich.
Leave your taste of lime,
Go hearty, and sublime.
Let us live some more,
Making castles of sand,
And with playing music band,
Let us roam some more ashore.
Are you jealous of our laugh?
Stop your poking,
Trying to make them dwarf.
Be with us,
With our joy luminous,
Don’t cut them away,
With your ticking array.
Let us live some more,
Making castles of sand,
And with playing music band,
Let us roam some more ashore.



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Copyrights  - ANSHUL GAUTAM
 
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27 comments:

  1. let us roam some more ashore...
    Oh i loved it anshul.

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  2. i dont know how to react... and this shall be mmy comment :-/

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  3. I loved this one! Its something PERFECT wt i look for usually!

    Well done! I m putting ths on my desk!

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  4. the two lines.....

    making castles of sand
    and playing with music bands

    took my heart away.

    this time it was a poetry that catches the senses at a very high pitch. well done.

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  5. Time and tide wait for no man but for a woman they make an exception :) Lovely poem..

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  6. Beautiful...:-)Am following you now.

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  7. I m feeling glad.
    My tension is free and i m relaxed.
    Some says time is precious.
    Effective use of time will make ur life delicious...

    Nice poem as i expected. Felt good. Keep going.

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  8. @ Sneha and Anirban Da - :)

    @Mani - Its my pleasure that you liked my work. :)

    @ Janu di & Sulekha di - Time and tide wait for none. Very true. This made me go engrossed with ideas about this poem. :)

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  9. @Ashish- Thank you buddy. :)Keep visitng, Keep motivating ...

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  10. Anshul, this is so profound and beautifully crafted...
    Saru

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  11. 'O Time! Thou tutor both to good and bad!...'
    (Shakespeare)
    Let us learn only some good from Time!
    -PORTIA

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  12. fantastic , great one love this poem may i copy it to print and put it on my wall god bless

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  13. Time never goes as we want it to I think.. I'd love it if it stood still during times I treasure and sped like warp speed during office meetings :D Sigh.. if only.. ;) Nicely worded, Anshul..!

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

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  14. Loved it Anshul....In life, many thoughts are born in the course of a moment, an hour, a day. Some are dreams, some visions. Often, we are unable to distinguish between them. To some, they are the same; however, not all dreams are visions. Much energy is lost in fanciful dreams that never bear fruit. But visions are messages from the Great Spirit, each for a different purpose in life. Consequently, one person's vision may not be that of another. To have a vision, one must be prepared to receive it, and when it comes, to accept it. Thus when these inner urges become reality, only then can visions be fulfilled. The spiritual side of life knows everyone's heart and who to trust. How could a vision ever be given to someone to harbor if that person could not be trusted to carry it out. The message is simple: commitment precedes vision.

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  15. @Saru- Thank you so much... :)
    @Portia - Yup. Very true...Time is the best tutor...though we learn after failing.

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  16. @ leo - You are very true leo...time never goes as we want it to I think...

    @Roy Durham - It would me my honour sir..:) thank you very much...

    @Alpana - "commitment precedes vision" I got it very well alpana di...best words of motivation, explanation. Feeling very happy that you visited and commented for my work :)

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  17. i never knew you are this expressive. Keep going!

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  18. Stunned. Dunno what to say. But I'll say this. You've got some awesome skills man! Hold on to them forever :)

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  19. oh thank you so much rajorshi...it always feel good when frnds motivate you in your work...keep visiting and keep motivating :)

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  20. This is beautiful Anshul. Lovely writing style. I look forward to seeing your future posts in your new group :)

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  21. Anshul, I really like your style of writing and thanks for Jagjit ji's tribute....

    I am listening to someone, somewhere now...

    #_#
    The Blunt Blog

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  22. @TheBluntBlogger - thank you so much...keep visiting to look for more on my site. :)

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  23. Great,loved it

    http://itstigertime.blogspot.com/2011/10/you-tube-tuesday_10.html

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  24. Anshul,

    Beautifully written and versed...

    xoxo

    Jessica

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  25. Anshul, I like the way you tell time, that it can die.. that its existence is because of us, because we give it the importance that it gets, that's why it is time immemorial, time sjupreme and whatever..
    I think we all have the ability in us to conquer time.
    A very well-written poem. :)

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